Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of The Brady Bunch episodes/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by Dabomb87 04:41, 26 March 2010 [1].

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List of The Brady Bunch episodes

List of The Brady Bunch episodes (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

Nominator(s): Jrh7925 (talk) 00:08, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

• Featured list candidates/List of The Brady Bunch episodes/archive1

I am nominating this for featured list because, after working hard on cleaning up both the presentation of the material and the references for the material, I feel it could be considered a featured list. Jrh7925 (talk) 00:08, 19 February 2010 (UTC)

• Restarted, old version.
• Note I have restarted this nom, as the page was getting long and the consensus was unclear. Can all reviewers please restate their opinions and list whatever concerns they have left? Dabomb87 (talk) 23:31, 15 March 2010 (UTC)

Support Looks good. Jimknut (talk) 23:41, 15 March 2010 (UTC)

• What's with the random letter j in the episode number box of season 5 episode 20......? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:54, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Looks to be a typo of some sort. Fixed. Jrh7925 (talk) 09:21, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Oppose I find the absence of references to be astonishing, coupled with the fact that majority of the reference present is from a retail source like Amazon.com. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 09:15, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

• Comment According to tools:~dispenser/cgi-bin/rdcheck.py/List of The Brady Bunch episodes you have some duplicate IDs and some of those redirects should likely be point to a season or episode number. — Dispenser 16:15, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Comments:

• What is so important about Gilligan's Island that it merits being mentioned in the first sentence of this article? Although I know little about either, for me The Brady Bunch is the better known of the two. But this may be my ignorance!
• "Even with negative reviews, The Brady Bunch managed to maintain within the Nielsen top thirty." - Sounds clunky to me, could you possibly reword the sentence better? I'm not sure you are using maintain properly either, not sure.
• "Ratings however, began to dip, and..." - As above really, the structure and wording seems off. There look to be too many commas, and yet there should really be another before "however". Harrias (talk) 20:09, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

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