Talk:Soviet frigate Neukrotimyy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

I will get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:24, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

• FYI, there's a later edition of Conway's that consolidates the earlier two volumes that I'd recommend.
  • Updated.
• Regardless, the Soviet chapter in both editions was written by Norman Friedman and the bibliography should reflect that. Gardiner was the editorial director, not the actual editor.
  • Amended.
• Add the edition (3rd?) for the Polmar book
  • Added.
• The main body is in pretty good shape though I have some suggestions for the armament section.
  • Thank you.
• Fire control for the guns consisted of a MR-143 Lev-214 radar provided by
  • Amended.
• Describe the ZIF-122 launchers as twin-arm units which ought to allow you to delete the bit about each being capable of launching two missiles
  • Amended.
• Rework the sonar sentence along the lines of "... including the bow-mounted MG-332T Titan-2T and the towed-array MG-325 Vega that had a range of up to 15 km"
  • Done.
• Link laser warning system, Netherlands
  • Links added to laser warning system, Luanda and Netherlands.
• Give the Nato code name for the Project 58
  • Added.
• Tell the reader which fleet the ship was assigned to
  • This is now in both the lead and main body.
• ship travel to the NATO member of the Netherlands awkward--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:45, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Rephrased.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for the review. If this is fine then I will update the other GA nominations in this class accordingly. simongraham (talk) 00:42, 5 January 2022 (UTC)

Yes, please.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:08, 6 January 2022 (UTC)