Talk:1986 Pacific hurricane season/GA1
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:31, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "which were issued four time a day at a " - Grammar error; "time" ---> "times"
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "Six other cyclones, entered the CPHC area of responsibility" - The comma is unnecessary
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "While located off the coast of Mexico, strengthened into Hurricane Celia at 1800 UTC June 27." - Sentence fragment; I recommend switching it to: "While located off the coast of Mexico, Celia strengthened into a hurricane at 1800 UTC June 27."
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "when it reached 25 °C (77 °F) waters" - Switch it to Fahrenheit first
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "northward over the U.S. States pf Arizona" - Typo
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "Satellite imagery began to show sings of" - Cool, the satellite imagery began to sing!
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "it manged to maintain marginal" - Typo
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "On Augst 30" - Typo
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "Javier weaken into a depression" - Grammar error; weaken ---> weakened
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "surfing event and Labor day Weekend." - Capital "d" on the word "day"
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "depression was embed in deep easterly flow." - Typo
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "minimal pressure of 984 mb." - Convert to inHg
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- Spell out the number 22 in the Hurricane Orlene section
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- Similar to the previous issue, spell out the number 23 in the Hurricane Paine section
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- "was declared Tropical Depression 21-E " - Spell out 21
- Done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 23:51, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
- Find a citation for the 1986 PHS names
- Done
- Move two of the names to the third list, so then all of the lists will be even
- Done
- There is date inconsistency within the references (i.e. 2007-07-19 and February 4, 2011).
- Who was the author of reference #2?
- Done
- Reference #3 has the wrong title, it should be: "The 1986 Central Pacific Tropical Cyclone Season"
- Done
- Reference #14 is missing the accessdate
- Done
- Add the specific dates for reference #18, 24, and 25.
- Unfortunately, due to the high number of issues (23), I have no other choice but to fail this article. After you fix the issues, you may consider re-nominating this article.--12george1 (talk) 20:31, 26 October 2011 (UTC)