Wikipedia:Peer review/Christina Milian/archive1
Christina Milian[edit]
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it really need to be improved. I hope to get it to GA status, but I can't do it by myself. Please look through and give me your thoughts!
Thanks, Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 01:51, 10 March 2008 (UTC)
Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)[edit]
- Image:Christinamilain.jpg has no fair use rationale for inclusion in this article. - Removed Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 01:00, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
- Attend to the warning template, the copyediting issue - if need be, head over to WP:LOCE. - Done Corn.u.co.pia ♥ Disc.us.sion 07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- Year ranges in infobox should use en-dash instead of hyphen per WP:DASH.
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Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - "Milian did commercials" unpleasant reading.
** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - "wasn't" - avoid contractions, so "was not".
** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - "I heard Santa On the Radio." - "I Heard Santa On The Radio". or "I Heard Santa on the Radio" or something else? The current doesn't look right to me!
** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - Acting career section is four short paras, consider merging and improving the prose.
- "Dec. 10 — 16 " - 10–16 December at the least...
** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - "who is the ex of her ex, Beau Dozier. " - too casual... More encyclopaedic language needed.
** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - Why text bold in the Singles section?
** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC) - Films, TV appearances and awards all need citations.
- References should use the {{cite web}} template. - Done Corn.u.co.pia ♥ Disc.us.sion 07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
That's a start for you! The Rambling Man (talk) 18:13, 17 March 2008 (UTC)