User talk:Ahurvitz2

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roberta Grossman (May 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Winner 42 was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

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Winner 42 Talk to me! 19:08, 11 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Ahurvitz2, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Winner 42 Talk to me! 19:08, 11 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roberta Grossman (July 9)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

Still lacking inline citations in places. Needs cleanup for typos and grammar. External links at the bottom seem to just be random and unorganized.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 19:05, 9 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Ahurvitz2, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sulfurboy (talk) 19:05, 9 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roberta Grossman (July 23)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Aerospeed was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

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Aerospeed (Talk) 17:24, 23 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Ahurvitz2, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Aerospeed (Talk) 17:24, 23 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome![edit]

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Managing a conflict of interest[edit]

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At WP:AFC you said "I have been asked again by Ms. Grossman to include ..." which suggests a close connection. 220 of ^Borg 19:11, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Roberta Grossman[edit]

Ahurvitz2, you have now removed all the references from the article. I said you need to remove the embedded external links not the references that are between <ref></ref> tags. This here [1] is what I meant220 of ^Borg 20:03, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You said to remove "embedding' external links in the text."

And then you instructed me to "move the sources out of the references section, and place them into the text after the fact/s to which they apply."

I removed the external links from the text.

But I didn't put the sources back into the text because they are external links.

Does that make sense to you? It makes no sense to me at all.

I'm sorry....I see you have made the corrections which I could not understand how to do.

wp:Indentation added to above message. 220 of ^Borg 20:28, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I have restored the refs, and removed the ones in the reference section that were unnecessary here. I think I have maintained all your intermediate edits. References and external links are two different things! Originally I didn't notice that you had duplicates of the references, both in the text and within the references section.

It is now 6:30 AM here and I am going to bed hours late! :-/ 220 of ^Borg

Thank you so much for your help. I really appreciate it. And hope it will work.--Ahurvitz2 (talk) 17:13, 7 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

[user:220 of Borg|220]] of ^{Borg
May I ask if you think my article is ready to be re-submitted?Ahurvitz2 (talk) 14:29, 6 August 2015 (UTC)--Ahurvitz2 (talk) 14:30, 6 August 2015 (UTC)}[reply]

August 2015[edit]

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Thank you. 220 of ^Borg 20:29, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roberta Grossman (August 7)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Primefac (talk) 17:28, 7 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Roberta Grossman has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Roberta Grossman. Thanks! Wxidea (talk) 05:30, 11 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Wxidea[edit]

Wxidea (talk) I took your comments to heart and did some surgery on my draft to shorten it. --Ahurvitz2 (talk) 16:53, 11 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Roberta Grossman has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Roberta Grossman. Thanks! Wxidea (talk) 15:42, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Wxidea: Thank you again for your continuing help[edit]

I'm very appreciative of your suggestions and guidance in writing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Roberta_Grossman

You left me a comment: "Add a block which is like a filmography. See https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paul_Thomas_Anderson (you can be simpler than that, and can skip the reviews if it's not appropriate for documentaries, but the idea is to have a table/grid/matrix."

Which I am adding right now. Along with new categories as you suggested.

Thank you. Ahurvitz2 (talk) 17:51, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roberta Grossman has been accepted[edit]

Roberta Grossman, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Wxidea (talk) 23:03, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Wxidea-My Extraordinary Gratitude and Thanks to You[edit]

Thank you again for your fine suggestions and timely messages. You have helped me immensely in finally getting my draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roberta_Grossman published.

Ahurvitz2 (talk) 23:21, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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