Talk:Ludachristmas

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Looking good. Here are some suggestions for improving the article:

• 30 Rock was first broadcast on was first broadcast on December 13, 2007, on the NBC network in the United States - repetition here; also don't need the comma after "2007".
• Tracy Jordan (Tracy Morgan) is ordered, by a court, to wear an alcohol monitoring device - don't need the commas.
• her flight, from Florida, being grounded by Hurricane Zapato - don't need the commas.
• Jack and his mother immediately dislike the Lemon's - "Lemons" as a plural.
• Jack, Colleen and The Lemons spend the day - "the Lemons" should be uncapitalised.
• Mitch that he is in fact 40-years-old - use "40 years old" or "a 40-year-old".
• No need to link individual years; this applies to 1985 after The Goonies reference.
• Ludachristmas party, in the writer's room - don't need the comma.
• recent order from the courts - "the courts" seems a little vague and maybe not right. Maybe something like "a jury" or "a courtroom judge"?
• Can we left-align Image:Tina Fey filming "Episode 209" of 30 Rock edited.jpg? In my browser it has to sit beneath the infobox so there's a big gap under the Plot section because the image is holding it down under the infobox.
• Link United States dollar in "US$390".
• This episode is also notable for being officially unnamed - hmm. I think "notable" is the wrong word here. The preceding point about Tracy Morgan's DUI charges does not make the episode notable (ruling out the "also" here) and not having a name doesn't either. Either reword or simply say something like "The episode was never officially named".
• Human Table at the Ludachristmas Party - "party" should be uncapitalised for consistency with previous usage.
• tied, with the CSI: Crime Scene Investigation episode "Lying Down With Dogs" which aired on CBS, for first place amoung men - get rid of both the commas and and maybe move "CBS" to the front reading "with CBS's CSI ... episode ... for first place"; also, "among" is misspelt.
• Place "true meaning of Christmas" in 'single quotation marks' as its a quote-in-a-quote.
• he did say "The A story - uncapitalise "the".
• modern, irreverent look at [christmas] - capitalise "Christmas"; it's a proper noun.
• No full-stop/period after the featured music parameter in the infobox.

That's pretty much it. The article will be on hold for a week so good luck with making the changes. —97198 (talk) 07:45, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for making the changes, but looks like there are still a few outstanding (a few you missed from above and one or two I may have just spotted):

• Jack, Colleen and The Lemons - "and the Lemons"; they are not a collective proper noun.
• he believes that he is still a 17 - doesn't make sense.
• took him to see The Goonies in 1985 - don't link 1985.
• Ludachristmas party, in the writer's room - don't need the comma.
• It ranked in second place in the 18–49 demographic and tied, with CBS - just "it ranked second place in" (no first "in"); also don't need the comma ater "tied".

—97198 (talk) 02:29, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Nice stuff. I'll promote to GA. —97198 (talk) 13:32, 23 August 2008 (UTC)

Move

I hear the DVD has this episode under the title Ludachristmas and suggest the article be moved there. 24.64.165.129 (talk) 07:21, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

Lemonparty reference

Anyone care to mention Dick Lemon's Lemonparty joke? 124.169.25.156 (talk) 07:05, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

That was a riot. I snickered a bit when he just yelled it from off-screen when they arrived, but figured it had to be just a coincidence until he later says "What's a Lemon party without old Dick?" At THAT point, I spit out my drink and had to explain the reference to my wife. 214.3.138.234 (talk) 12:32, 9 September 2009 (UTC)Steve

Plot

Changed "achieving Colleen's plan" to "unknowingly falling for Colleen's plan". You can do many things to a plan, but achieve is not one of them. You can achieve a goal, but not a plan. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.36.119.64 (talk) 21:08, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

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The redirect Episode 209 has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 January 19 § Episode 209 until a consensus is reached. Steel1943 (talk) 23:02, 19 January 2024 (UTC)