Talk:Convergent Science

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I have revised this article to address the reviewer's comments from the first submission. Please find below three sources that demonstrate the notability of this topic:

“Comparing CFD Software - Part 3: Semi-Comprehensive Software.” Resolved Analytics. April 10, 2019. https://www.resolvedanalytics.com/theflux/comparing-cfd-software-part-3-semi-comprehensive-cfd-software.

Bailey, Nick. "Power tool: How state-of-the-art software is revolutionising engine tuning." Racecar Engineering Magazine, March 2015.

Haight, Brent. “Convergent Science Eyes Gas Compression.” Gas Compression Magazine, November 2017. https://gascompressionmagazine.com/2017/11/14/convergent-science-eyes-gas-compression/. Esbf0711 (talk) 14:55, 5 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The article assumes a great deal of knowledge and does not seem friendly to non-specialist users. I have done an edit to show the sort of thing that may be required. Another example is "CFD" software. I don't know what this is. Presumably it is an acronym for something. I don't ask for dumbing down -just changes making this readable for the reasonably well educated general reader. I agree wholeheartedly with the comments on the article appearing to be "promotional"Spinney Hill (talk) 09:17, 20 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Work has been done on the promotional problems and I have made some more alterations but more work needs to be done to make the article more friendly to the general reader.. Keep up the good work. Spinney Hill (talk) 07:50, 30 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]