Recommend replacing PETA with a clearer term, such as "the military group PETA", "PETA", "Pembela Tanah Air (PETA)", or something similar. In the United States, PETA (in all caps) most commonly refers to PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals). davidwr/(talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail) 21:40, 12 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Except for the fact that this feature generally does not link to other articles in the blurb. I could write "Defenders of the Homeland" but I was worried that would be WP:UNDUE. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:55, 12 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
How about changing he became a leader with PETA during to he became a military leader with PETA during. This way, readers will have "military" in their heads by the time they get to the phrase PETA. davidwr/(talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail) 17:25, 13 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Fair enough, except that's bound to have a "militant animal rights activists" reading somewhere down the line. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:23, 13 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
