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Vengeance (2005)

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like for the article to be a professional wrestling Good Article. Any helpful feedback, would most be appreciated.

Thanks, Zenlax ^{T C S} 19:55, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

Looks good, just want to watch out for a few things.

1)The dates like "May23rd" you should change to -->May 23 2005 that way you can wikilink the date. Zenlax ^{T C S} 20:49, 22 February 2008 (UTC)

2)With that, you should wikilink dates. Zenlax ^{T C S} 20:49, 22 February 2008 (UTC)

3)Also consider covering a third feud in the BG section. Zenlax ^{T C S} 20:49, 22 February 2008 (UTC)

--TrUCo⁹31¹ 01:22, 22 February 2008 (UTC)

Good good, lastly I would recommend having someone copy edit the article, and also wait for the automated peer review. Then we shall see how it goes from there.TrUCo⁹31¹ 20:56, 22 February 2008 (UTC)

I just did a copyedit of the article, and I noticed a couple of things that need fixing.

• You alternate between RAW and Raw. Shouldn't they all be written with the lowercase letters? If not always, there are certainly times were all caps are used when they shouldn't be.

Got it. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 03:32, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

• This sentence makes no sense grammatically: "The last moment in the match saw Jericho dodge an Unprettier by Christian, which resulted in Christian being thrown directly to Cena, who was prompted directly onto Cena's shoulder and Cena retaining the WWE title, after he pinned Christian with an FU." Perhaps dividing into two sentences would help. I was going to fix it myself, but I didn't watch the match, so I thought I might mess up the meaning so that it was incorrect.

How 'bout now? --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 03:40, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

Good luck. Nikki311 02:40, 6 March 2008 (UTC)