Wikipedia:Peer review/Eli Todd/archive1
Eli Todd[edit]
I've listed this article for peer review because I want a general consensus of other people's criticisms and comments. Especially focus on the section Later personal life to make it flow, and help expand the conclusion.
Thanks,
--15:14, 13 January 2008 (UTC)Eli Todd (talk)
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