Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Seinfeld (season 2)/archive1
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Scorpion0422 00:02, 15 February 2009 [1].
Seinfeld (season 2)[edit]
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I believe this list meets criteria and follow the same style as similar FLs. --Gman124 talk 02:19, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Truco
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Comment - one of the rules for WP:FAC is that the same editor may not nominate more than one article at a time. I am unsure if the same rule applies here but if so then this nomination should be closed until the nomination for Seinfeld (season 1) is concluded. Might want to check with an FL wrangler. Otto4711 (talk) 18:07, 2 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]- Not at WP:FLC, users usually are usually able to nominate up to 3, since lists are less complex to review and is a less complex process as opposed to FAC.--TRUCO 22:15, 2 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Weak oppose from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) The writing in this article is better, but it is still not at FL quality yet. If I feel up to it, I might do some copy-editing myself. Dabomb87 (talk) 19:44, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "start on January 16, 1991. Its premiere "-->start on January 16, 1991. However, its premiere
- "It comprised
of12 episodes "
- "This season received"-->Season two received
- "thirteen years" Numbers over nine should be written in numerals.
- "This season was directed " Same as two bullets above. The "this" back-reference is often a bit confusing, better to refer to the noun directly.
- " Barney Martin replaced Phil Bruns as Jerry's Father
starting this season." Understood from larger context.
- "and caused NBC to put the show on hiatus"-->causing NBC to put the show on hiatus
- "after
justfour weeks"
- "thirteen episode order" Compound adjective, should be "thirteen-episode order"
- "rings with truth and familiarity, as well as laughter and just plain silliness." Logical punctuation (WP:PUNC), period should be outside the quotation marks.
- "The episodes "The Pony Remark" You are only talking about one episode here, why "The episodes"?
- "
The episode"The Deal" wasalso" Understood by now that you are talking about episodes.
- "George comes to Jerry complaining about his girlfriend Marlene"-->George complains to Jerry about his girlfriend Marlene
- "George takes Jerry's advice and breaks off their relationship" Not clear who "their" is.
- "George insists Jerry see Marlene to get back some books" Repetition of "insists" is a bit annoying. Insert "that" after "insists". Is there a better word than "get back"? (rhetorical question)
- "Jerry suddenly finds himself in a relationship with Marlene." Not possible. Clarify.
- "However, after seeing his act," Which act? Don't leave readers in the dark.
Those are most of the issues from the lead through the first episode summary. Dabomb87 (talk) 19:44, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Further down: "a starving Elaine mentions that she is so hungry that she would eat food off of another patrons plate" Spot the two redundant consecutive words.