Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of accolades received by Thani Oruvan/archive1
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List of accolades received by Thani Oruvan[edit]
List of accolades received by Thani Oruvan (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 17:01, 15 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
This article provides a listing of the notable awards and nominations received by the 2015 Indian Tamil action thriller film, Thani Oruvan starring Jayam Ravi and Nayanthara. This film is notable for garnering its cast and crew members, especially Ravi and Arvind Swamy, several awards and nominations. It is my seventh attempt at a accolades FLC. Any constructive comments to improve this list are most welcome. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 17:01, 15 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Aoba47
- It seems odd to credit Mohan Raja as the sole writer in the first sentence, when the article on the film points to Raja working with Subha for the writing of the screenplay and dialogues. I would address this in the lead to prevent misintepretations as the information on Subha comes much later in the first paragraph.
- Replace “and and” in the lead’s first paragraph with “and”.
- I do not believe you need “a” in front of the descriptive phrase for Siddharth Abhimanyu.
- The “Cat” in “cat and mouse” should not be capitalized.
Wonderful work with the list. Once my comments are addressed, I will support this. Aoba47 (talk) 04:28, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Aoba47: All of your above comments have been resolved. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 05:25, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Well written list, nothing really to complain about as per my assessment. Good luck! Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:46, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Aoba47 and Pavanjandhyala: Thanks guys. Your thoughts and comments are greatly appreciated. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 08:07, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "The film featured Jayam Ravi and Nayanthara in the lead roles" - the film still exists. I would use present tense.
- "the film's soundtrack and score were composed by Hiphop Tamizha" - I would end this sentence here, as it is a little long.
- Do we have the budget figure for the film? If it is available, it will help the reader understand how successful the film was.
- @FrB.TG: Its there at the start of the second paragraph. Didn't you notice? — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 09:02, 29 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Oh! I must have read over it.
- "including Best Performance in a Lead Role (Female) (Nayanthara) and Best Performance in a Comic Role (Ramaiah)" -again the sentence is too long so I would just end it here.
- The Times of India should have a wiki-link in fn 1.
- The newspaper's link should be removed in fn 5.
- FN 11- I believe you know what to do here. – FrB.TG (talk) 19:17, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @FrB.TG: The rest of your above comments have been resolved. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 09:02, 29 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:40, 31 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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