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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 10:27, 16 May 2012 [1].

List of Somerset CCC Twenty20 players[edit]

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Nominator(s): Harrias talk 16:51, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Another cricket list! This one is based upon the international player lists. It details the players who have played Twenty20 cricket for Somerset County Cricket Club. As usual, all comments and advice is welcome. (Note: I am competing in the WikiCup). Harrias talk 16:51, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Image review: The one image used appears to be free and properly tagged. Goodraise 17:16, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 12:53, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "Somerset have reached the domestic Twenty20 competition final on four occasions: the club won the 2005 Twenty20 Cup, and were runners-up in three consecutive seasons: 2009, 2010 and 2011." - sentence probably needs a ref
  • "Arul Suppiah has the best bowling figures in an innings, having claimed six wickets against Glamorgan in a 2011 match, while only conceding five runs" - not keen on the use of having, perhaps change to he?
  • Added a colon and changed to "he". Harrias talk 20:49, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Jos Buttler has affected the highest number of stumpings: 9" - the use of affected sounds a little odd to me, is that common terminology in cricket? I have watched a bit (mainly the ashes), can't remember hearing about a wicket-keeper affecting a stumping

NapHit (talk) 16:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • It isn't common, but it is used. Nervertheless, changed it to "made". Harrias talk 20:49, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 21:08, 15 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • Minor, but the semi-colon before "100 since his debut in 2004" feels like it should be something else: either a comma or colon.
  • Just my preference, perhaps, but I think the "amongst"s are better stylistically as "among"s. There's a couple here.
  • I still see a couple of them in the lead. Did the edit in which you changed them go through? I've seen issues with that a couple of times. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:05, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ha! I meant to change them from "amongst" to "among", but instead made them all "amongst"! I must have been knackered when I made that change. Harrias talk 09:14, 15 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lead image could use alt text.
  • Formatting of reference 11 is buggy at the moment. The link isn't showing up in the citation. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:27, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed; it was missing the "http://" Harrias talk 20:49, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 12:35, 15 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Lead says Tresco scored 1,954 runs but the table says 1,899.
  • Odd, I swear I'd already done that. No worries, fixed now. Harrias talk 20:55, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was the highest score" surely "is" the highest?
  • Is there a "Statistics accurate as of..." anywhere?
  • Ref ->Ref(s)

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:03, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments, pretty sure all points have been addressed now. Harrias talk 20:55, 10 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]


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