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The list was promoted by Giants2008 01:21, 21 September 2015 [1].

Anurag Kashyap filmography[edit]

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Nominator(s): Yashthepunisher (talk) 06:00, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This is my third attempt on it for FL. Because of someone else, I got accused of a sock and this list failed. I can't let that happen again. This list has gone through a PR and now I feel it meets the criteria's. -- Yashthepunisher (talk) 06:00, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Pavanjandhyala[edit]

A decent list overall, but i want these to be fixed by the nominator/concerned within a reasonable time.

  • Please make sure all the links are white here
Will archiving them solve the problem? --Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:18, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:41, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Links are fixed. Cowlibob (talk) 18:56, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • His next venture was Black Friday (2007), a film on the... — what does a venture mean here? Is it his production, script written or directorial?
Reworded.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:19, 2 Spetember 2015 (UTC)
  • After making the thriller That Girl in Yellow Boots (2011)... — Again, the same.
Making Indicates he made it, which means he directed it. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:19, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Filmmaking is such a beautiful thing, it may mislead the readers that he did produce it also. So, kindly rephrase it to directed. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:41, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Done. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:00, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • he served as the creative director in the Amitabh Bachchan-starring television mini-series Yudh (2014),... — i'm of the opinion that the sentence shall look better if it ends with Yudh (2014) starring Amitabh Bachchan.
Done --Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:22, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any explanation on the word "presented"?
He helped both the docu's in getting them a theatrical release. If it doesn't looks Important, should I remove it? --Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:26, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Helping two documentaries getting a theatrical release! It does not look so trivial however. Let it stay. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:41, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In 2015, he co-produced two successful ventures NH10 and Hunterrr. — another "venture". Kindly replace it with film.
Done --Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:24, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Nothing is mentioned about Masaan in the lead, even after weeks of its theatrical release.
Mentioning every film he is associated with in the lead will Increase its size. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:28, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I asked you to do so for the critical acclaim it has received. But, your explanation seems reasonable enough. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:41, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I think you are right, that movie is worth mentioning. So, I have added it. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 16:59, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Message me once all are done. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 14:59, 1 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support — Hoping the best to happen. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 07:33, 6 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from FrB.TG[edit]

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  • I think you should use (and then wiki-link) the word Bollywood as it is more relevant.
Done
  • "Anurag Kashyap is an Indian film director, producer, screenwriter and actor" – how about filmmaker?
Filmmaker in place of director or everything?
In place of the first three. -- Frankie talk 15:01, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Both films garnered positive reviews" – in the previous sentence you have mentioned three films. Which "both films" are you talking about; the first two or the last two?
Rephrased and removed the critics review section.
  • "In 2013, he made a short film on eve teasing titled That Day After Everyday" – what do you mean by "made"?
Rephrased
  • "he served as the creative director in the television mini-series"
Done.
  • There are some redundant references for example ref 27. Please use sources in the lead only when it's not in the other parts of the article.
Removed
  • Wiki-link Sify in reference 15.
Done.
Should I remove this film? Water (2005)? Coz no source like IMDB, Rotten Tomatoes or All movies mentions his name in the credits. I seriously doubt if he has a writing credit in the film.
  • Filmfare is a magazine so italicize it in source 72.
Done
  • Wiki-link The Hollywood Reporter in ref 79 and de-link it in ref 101.
Done
  • Ref 18: The Guardian – I think you know what I am asking for.
Its actually not the guardian, not even in the older version.
See ref 80. -- Frankie talk 17:13, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Done. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 03:00, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • International Business Times in ref 86 – the same.
Done
  • Is it Mid Day or Mid-day. Write one and stick to it.
Done
  • Video from ref 100 seems to be uploaded by a fan. Replace the source.
Its uploaded by Ashish Ghadiali, who is the co-writer and director of the film. You can see his name in the opening credit.
  • Wiki-link India Today in source 103. -- Frankie talk 19:24, 2 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Done. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:23, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – After so many nominations, I hope this is going to be its breakthrough attempt. -- Frankie talk 15:05, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment when I sort the table by "Director", the films he has directed go to the bottom; they should be at the top (same for all the other columns). Name the Bombay Talkies segment he made. For Jayate and Paanch could you give some sort of date in the notes? (approx when it was made, for eg)—indopug (talk) 09:45, 8 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I see no need in sorting the table but I have mentioned the segment name for Bombay Talkies and Mumbai Cutting. I have mentioned the dates when Jayate and Paanch were supposed to get a theatrical release. --Yashthepunisher (talk) 16:09, 8 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The entire point of include a sorting option is that you see your chosen sort at the beginning. It is annoying for the reader to click sort by director and then have to scroll all the way to the bottom of the table.—indopug (talk) 17:02, 11 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for resolving the Issue yourself. -- Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:58, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Kailash[edit]

Just archive the URLs as they are unlikely to last forever. Also, Gangs of Wasseypur has an article containing info on both the films. Fit that somehow here. The article otherwise looks good, and has my support. Kailash29792 (talk) 17:00, 11 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Archived most of the links and added Gangs of Wasseypur. -- Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:58, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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