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Your submission at Articles for creation: Alessandro Bausani (March 29)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CASSIOPEIA was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

1. Pls rm red ink links in the body text. (2) pls identify "orange' link by click the orange text and specify the page which needs to be linked. (2) pls provide inline citation (independent, reliable sources). Pls red the grey panel message and click on the blue highlighted text for further info.

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CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 05:29, 29 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Udhrart1! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 05:29, 29 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your edits to Eugenics[edit]

Thanks, but we don't use undergraduate papers as sources. We rarely use Master degree material, and even a PhD might not be used if it doesn't meet WP:UNDUE. Such a strong statement needs excellent sources. I'm also dubious about Whitman, not because he's not a good source, he is, but because he doesn't seem to be discussing eugenics in the first few pages. Doug Weller talk 13:41, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]