User talk:Metalfoam

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Hello, Metalfoam, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Feedback

Hi Metal, I have replied to your request for feedback at Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 May 27. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:10, 27 May 2011 (UTC)

Hi Crisco, thanks for your feedback. I have followed your suggestions and modified the articles. I realized my non-neutral tone in the earlier version of this article, and now I have modified the article. I also took care of the inline citation issue; placed citations where it is most appropriate. I already had many internal Wiki links before, plus I added more now. I also followed the Wiki format for the text. I hope now it is acceptable. I am sure later other editors will contribute significantly and add more valuable information to this article.Metalfoam (talk) 13:04, 17 June 2011 (UTC)