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Moved your article to draft[edit]

Hi @LIYULUN, please don't take this personally, but I moved Happy Baby (animation) to a draft (a work-in-progress). I appreciate your evident hard work on the article, but there are too many grammatical errors and the article is not written in a way that suits Wikipedia. For example, your assertion that "Happy Baby" is loved by everyone for five main reasons:" does not satisfy WP:Neutral point of view and the phrase "invade the Star Planet on the Star Planet." does not make sense in English. I would recommend Wikipedia:Teahouse to get some advice on how to improve the article, and would also recommend DeepL as a better translation tool. Thanks,

使用人工智能翻译的版本: 请不要介意,但我把Happy Baby (animation)移到了草稿(一个正在进行中的工作)。我非常感谢你在这篇文章上的辛勤工作,但有太多的语法错误,文章的写作方式也不适合维基百科。例如,你声称“《Happy Baby》因五个主要原因而受到所有人的喜爱”不符合[[WP point of view]](中立观点)原则,而且“invade the Star Planet on the Star Planet”这一短语在英语中没有意义。我建议你可以到[[Wikipedia ]](维基百科茶馆)寻求一些关于如何改进文章的建议,也建议你使用DeepL 作为一个更好的翻译工具。谢谢。 Bremps... 17:17, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice, I'll try to revise the article LIYULUN (talk) 17:31, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]