User talk:DodoH

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Starwood[edit]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Starwood 1. This article is out of date. It says that Starwood was one of the world's largest hotel companies, it owned, managed, or franchised over 1200 properties. But actually, after its merging with Marriott, now they are the world’s largest hotel company with over 6,000 properties in over 120 countries. 2.Several citations do not work. Maybe because of the merging, they move several starwood's site to Marriott's website.DodoH (talk) 16:44, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed Projects[edit]

1. Total revenue https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Total_revenue This article is incomplete and dose not cite any resources. I can expand it with my microeconomics knowledge.
Three sources: 1. Mankiw（2015）Principles of Microeconomics，_7th_Edition 2. Principles of Microeconomics, Global Edition 11th 11e 11rd Karl E. Case·Ray C. Fair·Sharon M. Oster 3. https://www.khanacademy.org/economics-finance-domain/microeconomics/elasticity-tutorial/price-elasticity-tutorial/v/total-revenue-and-elasticity (How elasticity and inelasticity affect the total revenue)

2. Environmental policy in China https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Environmental_policy_in_China Part of this article is outdated. I can find resources to update it.
Three sources: http://www.lexisnexis.com/hottopics/lnacademic/(China's strengthened pollution laws yield results) https://wenku.baidu.com/view/a3405259915f804d2b16c1f6.html (difference between new version and old version of the law) http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0095069617303182 (consequence of the law)

3. Mobike https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mobike This article needs additional citations for verification. Mobke is the world's largest bicycle operator bases in China, so most of the resources about it is in Chinese. I can find more Chinese resources and cite them, I also can summarize the resources in English. DodoH (talk) 18:11, 15 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your first choice looks very good. Go for it.[edit]

WritingMan (talk) 15:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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