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Your submission at Articles for creation: Optimum Info (April 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Taking Out The Trash were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Taking Out The Trash (talk) 22:41, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Dlieuoptimum! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Taking Out The Trash (talk) 22:41, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Dlieuoptimum, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

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Thank you for the feedback. I am trying to add a disclosure at the top of the article to indicate that I am a paid editor. How do I do that? I tried adding the paid contributor template and this pops up when I try to add it:

{{Connected contributor (paid)}} should only be used on talk pages. Dlieuoptimum (talk) 22:45, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Disclosures belong on your user page where I see you already have one. You can also add one to the talk page of the draft, but definitely not to the draft page itself. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 23:32, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Optimum Info[edit]

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Optimum Info, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Email[edit]

While I have received your email, I do not discuss matters like that off-wiki. If you would like to discuss the matter you raised, please either contact me on my talk page, or reply here (I will put this section on watch so I will be notified of replies you leave here). Seraphimblade ^{Talk to me} 21:41, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

I saw that you deleted the page I created (Optimum Info). I rewrote the page and was wondering if you could look at it again to see if it would be approved?

The new draft:

Optimum Info

Optimum Info is a global company headquartered in Irvine, California, specializing in network development and after-sales solutions for the automotive, transportation, and equipment industries. The company, founded in 2009, serves clients worldwide with tailored business solutions.

Company Type: Private

Industry: Information Technology

Founded: 2009

Headquarters: Irvine, California

Key People: Arvind Verma, Founder/CEO

Number of employees: 100+

Website: https://optimuminfo.com/

History

In 2009, Optimum developed a ground-up business management solution aimed at streamlining financial statement submission and performance reports for automotive OEMs. This project marked the inception of Optimum Info, which has since expanded its offerings to encompass various network development and after-sales solutions.

The company offers the following suite of solutions:

• Network Development

o Dealer Business Management

o Network Planning & Performance Management

o Dealer Packages Management

o Dealer Contact Management

o Performance Dashboards

o Standards Audit Solution

• After-Sales Solutions

o Warranty Claims Processing Solution

o Parts Order Management Solution

o Service Management Solution

o Warranty Analytics

Company Locations

Irvine, CA, USA (Headquarters)

Toronto, Canada

Frankfurt, Germany

Ahmedabad, India

Noida, India

Atlanta, Georgia, USA

London, United Kingdom

Turin, Italy

Barcelona, Spain

Buenos Aires, Argentina

References

“About Us”. Optimum Info. Retrieved 19 March 2024.

Thank you! Dllieu10 (talk) 21:45, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

To have a review, please create a draft and use the articles for creation process. That said, I see at least two issues with a skim: There are no reliable and independent sources cited, and while companies may sell sand or software, machines or massages, they do not, except for a few actual chemical companies, sell "solutions". Avoid any marketese buzzwords like that. Seraphimblade ^{Talk to me} 21:54, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]