User talk:Cbeedy/History of computer science
This article so far is very informative. Wiki is supposed to be a source that is available and easy to understand for everyone, I understand that this topic is difficult to write about but at points this is very technical and may be hard to understand for some. Certain phrases and words are not explained and may be difficult for others to follow along, ex rule sets. The structure of this article follows the same flow as the original which is a good addition, however your writing has multiple sections with little information. Adding to the sections with different sources or different areas to expand upon could help. For example, you talk about how a computer can write a programming language, there is much you can add to this such as the different programming languages, maybe an example of java, python, C sharp, etc. This will allow people to see what different programming languages look like and how they're written, as non computer science majors have little idea of what a "programming language" means or looks like.
Bryceb4312 (talk) 16:48, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Hi Bryceb4312 Thank you for your feedback. I intended to briefly talk about the people that helped forge new paths in computer science. I wanted to keep the structures that the previous contributors set up. At the time of this convention, I am writing about Artificial Intelligence; those computer languages did not exist. I also have a link to most of the keywords that will bring them to the topics to learn more about if the reader is curious. I thought adding too much about an aspect of computer science would pull away from the founding members that I was trying to convey. I will consider your advice while expanding on to this topic I am talking about.