User talk:Amsauerwein

Test Amsauerwein (talk) 02:38, 16 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Uranus, Missouri[edit]

Regarding this edit, please stop removing those tags. First off, the {{use mdy dates}} tag isn't a warning message, but it is a message to bots and other editors to use the "Month DD, YYYY" format for dates in the article. That's a good idea to be consistent, and per our Manual of Style, American places/etc use that date format absent a good reason to do otherwise, like say military ties.

As for the warning templates, they're all appropriate. The article as currently written takes a promotional tone. It reads like an advertisement and not an encyclopedia article. Until that is changed, the message needs to stay. The article also engages in peacock language to further that promotional tone. Finally, yes, the article needs more citations. Solve those issues, then remove the tags. Until then, they need to stay. Imzadi 1979 → 03:39, 21 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Got it. I edited this page as a part of a course assignment. Learning to rules of editing is more difficult than I thought. I made the suggestion to the professor that it would be a more advantageous assignment to have us create in a sandbox then find articles that need major edits and do it in a week or so time span. I have a lot to learn. Amsauerwein (talk) 23:42, 21 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]