Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
The comment the reviewer left was:
Need to rewrite promotional tone present throughout draft.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Muntadher Saleh and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Hello, 004bvan!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ~Liancetalk 00:05, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Liance,
Thank you for your feedback on the draft article about Muntadher Saleh. I appreciate your guidance on ensuring that the article meets Wikipedia’s standards for neutrality and verifiability. To improve the draft and align it with Wikipedia’s guidelines, could you please provide some specific suggestions or an example of how you would approach writing an article about Muntadher Saleh?
In particular, I would appreciate your advice on:
1. Ensuring a neutral tone throughout the article.
2. Properly referencing a range of independent, reliable sources to establish the subject’s notability.
3. Structuring the content in a way that complies with Wikipedia’s policies.
Your expertise and insights would be incredibly valuable in helping me refine this article. I look forward to your suggestions.
