Template:Did you know nominations/Roberto Firmino

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Harrias ^talk 10:02, 24 May 2015 (UTC)

Roberto Firmino[edit]

(

)

... that Roberto Firmino (pictured) started his career with Figueirense?

5x expanded by Royroydeb (talk). Self nominated at 07:19, 27 March 2015 (UTC).

Thanks for improving this article. Unfortunately, it's a tad bit short for DYK - the previous revision was 1023 chars but the current revision is only 4366 chars long. For 5x, 5115 chars will be required. If you manage to expand this within the next 7 days, ping me and I'll take another gander. Fuebaey (talk) 12:34, 27 March 2015 (UTC)

Also it's a really un-interesting fact. Giant Snowman 15:48, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

Now it is as long as the requirement, @Fuebaey:. @GiantSnowman: And I would like to change the hook to

ALT1: ... that in the second match of 2013–14 Bundesliga, Roberto Firmino (pictured) scored two goals and assisted thrice against Hamburger SV in a 5–1 victory?

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:11, 30 March 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response, been away this past week. I've made a copyedit pass to add some minor details and address some redundancy. With that I'm afraid, I can no longer review this nomination. Best of luck nonetheless. There's scope for expansion in his 13/14 season if you need more length. Fuebaey (talk) 19:33, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

QPQ has not been supplied, and must be for this nomination to continue. Please supply a QPQ at your earliest convenience. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:49, 1 May 2015 (UTC)

@Royroydeb: ? Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 13:34, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

@Panyd: See Template:Did you know nominations/Deepika Padukone filmography. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 16:05, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

- full review needed then! Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 16:25, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

Royroydeb, Please be sure to do a different QPQ for Badshahi Mosque, then, since you've also listed this QPQ there. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:58, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I didnt notice. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 03:14, 13 May 2015 (UTC)

Just popping by to say another editor has gutted most of this article. Needs an extensive rewrite to appear on DYK. Fuebaey (talk) 06:22, 13 May 2015 (UTC)

The article had 1023 prose characters before expansion; currently, after a great deal of material was removed by GiantSnowman as "trivial and unencyclopedic" (according to the GA review, which closed as unsuccessful), it's at 2210 prose characters, barely a 2x expansion. Unless a great deal of new, non-trivial material can be added in the next week or so, the nomination won't be able to survive. Perhaps the thing to do is to work on the article gradually until it does successfully become a good article, and then renominate for DYK. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:28, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

No changes made. Rcsprinter¹²³ (discourse) @ 22:13, 23 May 2015 (UTC)