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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SSTflyer 17:03, 30 March 2016 (UTC)

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Presidential Emergency Facility[edit]

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Created by LavaBaron (talk). Self-nominated at 06:50, 11 March 2016 (UTC).

Endorse ALT1 as per Gatoclass. LavaBaron (talk) 16:43, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
Date and length fine. AGF on offline hook source. I have made a minor alteration to include palace after crystal simply because it would then draw in people to the grandeur of "King Obama" as well as referencing the English football club of the same name. QPQ done no close para. GTG for AFD. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 21:53, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
  • I thought the change from "crystal" to "palace" was good, because "crown and palace" is more intriguing than "crown and crystal". However, I think the phrase "crown and crystal palace" detracts from the mystery of the hook because it then suggests a collection of glass or crystal ornaments instead of an actual crown and palace. So I'm adding the following alt:
  • ALT2: ... that President Obama is deprived of a cannonball, cowpuncher, and corkscrew, but retains his crown and palace? Gatoclass (talk) 09:12, 29 March 2016 (UTC)
  • Note to set builder: ALT2 is just a slight variation of ALT1 and thus doesn't need a separate approval. Gatoclass (talk) 09:14, 29 March 2016 (UTC)
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