Template:Did you know nominations/Patricia Delgado

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:30, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Patricia Delgado

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Patricia Delgado and Daniel Sarabia in Swan Lake

~~... that ballerina Patricia Delgado (pictured) danced in a music video for indie rock band The National, and performed with the band on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon?~~ Source: "Performing their slow-simmering ballad "Dark Side of the Gym," The National brought their music video to life with the help of dancers Patricia Delgado and Justin Peck on The Tonight Show on Monday night (Oct. 1)." ([1])
- ALT1:... that ballerina Patricia Delgado (pictured) served as the associate producer for the 2020 Broadway revival of West Side Story, and as associate choreographer in the upcoming film adaptation of the musical? Source: "Early on in the rehearsal process of the upcoming film West Side Story, director Steven Spielberg turned to Patricia Delgado and asked her why the dancers weren't in unison. 'He was right,' remembers Delgado, who was serving as associate choreographer to her husband, choreographer Justin Peck... In June of 2018, she began a two-year dive into West Side Story, beginning with work on the film and, later, as associate producer on the recent Broadway revival choreographed by Anne Teresa De Keersmaeker." ([2])

Reviewed: Chris Redd

Created by Corachow (talk). Self-nominated at 23:47, 24 February 2021 (UTC).

Interesting life with many aspects on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and great. I'd like some reference to it in the hook. Both hooks say two things, but two yet different from dancing Swan Lake with the Miami City Ballet in 2007, which is too much for a caption. Id say that and one of the others for contrast. For my taste, the show name is way too long, and might steal the show ;) - and people like me don't even know it. - In the article, there's a lot of present tense, - will you watch for it to become past? When the baby will be born? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:58, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Adapting ALT0 as followed,

ALT0a: ... that ballerina Patricia Delgado (pictured) danced in a music video for indie rock band The National, and performed with the band on a late-night talk show?

I think her life after Miami City Ballet is much more interesting for DYK so I'm fine with dropping the picture, it's just we rarely even have free images of ballet dancers in this century, let alone a good one. I will watch the page and update it, not sure when will the baby arrive. Corachow (talk) 23:27, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

As you wish, however, I think we could even be more drastic and end after National. Who cares about a TV show, famous or not, - I suggest piping somehow. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:59, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

What about this,

ALT0b: ... that ballerina Patricia Delgado (pictured) danced in a music video for indie rock band The National? Corachow (talk) 09:24, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

preferred, - thank you. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:23, 3 March 2021 (UTC)