Template:Did you know nominations/Mason Cox

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 21:33, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Mason Cox[edit]

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~~... that Mason Cox played soccer at high school, was a walk-on player for Oklahoma State Cowboys basketball team and now plays as a ruckman for Collingwood Football Club?~~

Created by Shirt58 (talk), SuperJew (talk), and The-Pope (talk). Nominated by Shirt58 (talk) at 13:08, 1 May 2016 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. It appears you have more than 5 DYK creation credits, so a QPQ is in order. The hook reads more like a biography than a hook. The part about him playing on the women's team has a lot of potential! Yoninah (talk) 18:57, 12 May 2016 (UTC)

- How about:
ALT1: ... that Mason Cox practiced with the Cowgirls, was a walk-on player for the Cowboys, and is now a professional Australian rules footballer for the Magpies? The-Pope (talk) 15:18, 18 May 2016‎ (UTC)

Thank you, that looks better. I added "Magpies" to the article (it's in the source). There is now one paragraph without any citations, per Rule D2. And we're still waiting for a QPQ. Yoninah (talk) 17:33, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

QPQ ready? Time for a re-review? --PFHLai (talk) 14:24, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

@PFHLai: it appears that a citation was added to the paragraph without letting us know. All paragraphs are cited now. I'm happy to submit one of my own QPQs to get this to the main page: Template:Did you know nominations/I Am Tour (Leona Lewis). As I started the review above, should I complete it, or should another editor sign off on this? Yoninah (talk) 15:24, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

@Yoninah: It would not be a bad idea to have you complete the review. As you are generously donating one of your own QPQ credits, this review would allow you to "re-stock". BTW, it doesn't look like the nominator, Shirt58 (talk · contribs), has ever done a DYK nom review before. --PFHLai (talk) 05:38, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

OK. People have been editing this page since I reviewed it, but the review still stands, with no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 09:15, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Actually, everybody knows this one. They call him the "American 'Pie" Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:45, 14 June 2016 (UTC)