Template:Did you know nominations/Lo Nuestro Award for Pop New Artist of the Year

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 22:47, 27 November 2013 (UTC)

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Lo Nuestro Award for Pop New Artist of the Year[edit]

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Created by Jaespinoza (talk). Self nominated at 19:52, 31 October 2013 (UTC).

  • - Can the hook be rephrased; the phrase "the same award" needs better phrasing in hook to become clearer on first reading. Article length is fine. - AnakngAraw (talk) 16:34, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
You are so right, the ALT1 is a clearer option. Thanks for your review. Javier Espinoza (talk) 04:20, 26 November 2013 (UTC)
You're welcome, but I also have an alternate:
ALT2 ... that in 2000 American singer Christina Aguilera won the Grammy Award for Best New Artist and then the following year won a categorically similar award at the Lo Nuestro Awards? - AnakngAraw (talk) 06:21, 27 November 2013 (UTC)
Hook checks out (I added the refs). Text length is fine even though this is a list. I think the hook misses out on the idea that she was a "new" artist in 2000 and still a "new" artist a yrar later. I think ALT1 is the most hookiest expression of the idea. Age is fine. Lots of refs. No obvious para phrasing. Thanks. Victuallers (talk) 20:41, 27 November 2013 (UTC)
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