Template:Did you know nominations/Jedi Training: Trials of the Temple

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The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 03:08, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

Jedi Training: Trials of the Temple[edit]

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The Seventh Sister and Darth Vader dueling young padawans in Trials of the Temple

... that Jedi Training: Trials of the Temple lets children duel Darth Vader or the Seventh Sister, as well as featuring Darth Maul?

ALT1:... that Jedi Training Academy originally only took place during Star Wars Weekends?

Converted from a redirect by Elisfkc (talk). Self-nominated at 23:37, 4 January 2016 (UTC).

Article developed from a redirect on the day of the nomination. The entire "Jedi Training Academy" section is unsourced. – Muboshgu (talk) 01:37, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

@Muboshgu: Better? Elisfkc (talk) 02:03, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

Better. I suggest splitting those big paragraphs into two each for readibility, and putting inline citations immediately behind the hook facts. The present sources support the proposed hooks. Copyvio detection (1, 2, 3) comes back clean. I think the first proposed hook works better if rewritten as such: – Muboshgu (talk) 20:34, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

ALT3' ... that Jedi Training: Trials of the Temple features Darth Maul and lets children duel Darth Vader or the Seventh Sister?