Template:Did you know nominations/Indonesian exile literature

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:30, 13 April 2012 (UTC)

Indonesian exile literature[edit]

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 11:42, 19 March 2012 (UTC)

  • The article itself looks alright. It's well-referenced and discusses the political and historical background elaborately. I was a little disappointed that it doesn't really name examples of exile writers or say a lot about their writing itself. I'm not too crazy about those two hooks. They don't seem too interesting or surprising. But, I couldn't really find an alternative in the article. So, if one can't be found, I'd prefer the first hook.--Carabinieri (talk) 13:27, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
  • The section "Writers" has a list. The sources did not go into examples, so I could not include it either. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:08, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
  • This needs further feedback. Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:57, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
I think this is good to go, assuming good faith on sources that are offline for me. Well-referenced and well-written. I think the original hook is the better hook. Moswento (talk | contribs) 13:24, 12 April 2012 (UTC)