Template:Did you know nominations/Edward Cronjager

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Edward Cronjager[edit]

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Edward Cronjager on the set of the 1928 film, Moran of the Marines

... that for the 1954 film Beneath the 12-Mile Reef, seven-time Academy Award nominee Edward Cronjager became the first cinematographer to use CinemaScope underwater?

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Improved to Good Article status by Onel5969 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:39, 10 April 2016 (UTC).

Checks out for date, length, policy and source. I might recommend a bit of rewording, ie., "that for the 1954 film Beneath the 12-Mile Reef, 7-time Academy Award nominee Edward Cronjager became the first cinematographer to use CinemaScope underwater?" Remember also that the article which is being featured by the hook has to be bolded. :) Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:52, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

I have no issue with changing the sentence structure order. And of course complying with the bold requirement. Thanks. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 12:10, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

With the change made, all checks out! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:22, 29 April 2016 (UTC)