Template:Did you know nominations/Daramyn Tömör-Ochir

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 02:51, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Daramyn Tömör-Ochir[edit]

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... that a symposium on Genghis Khan led to the removal of Daramyn Tömör-Ochir as a "nationalist" from the Mongolian Politburo?

Reviewed: Dick Helander

Created by Crispulop (talk). Self nominated at 23:22, 10 April 2014 (UTC).

Overall, the article looks good: recently added, the tag is well-sourced. I added one "according to whom" tag. I think that could be removed just by changing the phrasing of that one sentence. Mvblair (talk) 18:22, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I think I've improved the sentence now. Crispulop (talk) 15:33, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

Nice article, good-looking sources, and a nice "juxtaposition" for the hook. Mvblair (talk) 18:45, 29 April 2014 (UTC)