Template:Did you know nominations/Charles McEwen Hyde

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:31, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

Charles McEwen Hyde

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• ... that a letter from Charles McEwen Hyde (pictured) prompted Robert Louis Stevenson to accurately predict sainthood for Father Damien?

• ALT1: ... that Kamehameha Schools trustee Charles McEwen Hyde (pictured) was descended from Scottish?
• ALT2: ... that a letter from Charles McEwen Hyde (pictured) prompted Robert Louis Stevenson to publicly express his belief that Father Damien would one day achieve sainthood?

• Reviewed: mossy saxifrage

Created/expanded by Maile66 (talk). Self nom at 22:13, 30 April 2012 (UTC)

• Added ALT1 hook. Maile66 (talk) 00:24, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
• : I like the first hook involving Stevenson and Father Damien. But it just doesn't sound right saying predict. --KAVEBEAR (talk) 11:21, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
• I've reworded it in Alt2. Is it within the character limit? If we take out "predict", I need to tweak that in the article's lead. Also, Kavebear, I'm fine with any rewording of your own that would make it better for DYK --Maile66 (talk) 11:42, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
• Could you merge the first three sections under one header unless you plan to expand them more significantly.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 11:50, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
• Done. --Maile66 (talk) 12:04, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
• Good to go, keep up the good work.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 22:29, 7 May 2012 (UTC)