Template:Did you know nominations/Cecil Duncan

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:38, 5 August 2020 (UTC)

Cecil Duncan

Diagram of an ice hockey rink
Diagram of an ice hockey rink

Created by Flibirigit (talk). Co-nominated by Flibirigit and HickoryOughtShirt?4 at 22:20, 12 July 2020 (UTC).

  • New enough and long enough. QPQ present. All hooks are in the article, represented as citations, and interesting (I do prefer ALT0 myself). No textual issues. Image for ALT0 is freely licensed. One suggestion: you tend to join sentence pieces with a comma and "and" when the comma isn't necessary. I've removed many of these. You need both a comma and "and" when two full sentences are being joined, but not when there is no subject in the second half. Raymie (tc) 01:56, 2 August 2020 (UTC)