Talk:The Salvation (film)

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Plot !?[edit]

Should the plot reveal more or less everything that happens ? Personally, I prefer the plot to give a brief explanation of what kind of film it is, the background and possibly describe some main characters. This plot is in my opinion a too detailed and far too revealing one. Boeing720 (talk) 01:57, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I agree Boeing720, the plot summary looks overly long and too detailed (see WP:FILMPLOT). Feel free to precis it down to around 400-700 words - or I will try to when I have the time. JezGrove (talk) 09:49, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I have watched the film once only. Perhaps you can do it better ? I would keep the background stuff (why they have come to America) , perhaps described the "Dilligence scenes" (including their intended travel company becomes changed in the last moment, from ordinary people to the bandits - a critical moment, but not too revealing). Perhaps phrases like "as the former prisoner(s ?) is(are ?) getting drunk, his(their ?) interest in the wife increases" ... "leading to a total disaster, for which vengeance is called".. "but the brothers are not dealing with ordinary crooks" - something in line with that. Perhaps. No details of how the band members are killed on by one etc. I might return, but I really need to refresh my memory. The important thing is to not reveal it all, I think. Thanks Boeing720 (talk) 21:18, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]