Talk:Secret Agent 23 Skidoo

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sounds kind of like an advertisement[edit]

Maybe it's just me, but this article sounds like it's an ad for Secret Agent 23 Skidoo saying things like "Their lyrics are intelligent, positive and empowering, without being overt." Maybe I'm in the wrong, but if someone else thinks so then maybe some improvements could be made. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Joncoale (talk • contribs) 06:02, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

agreed. There are sources cited to back the advertising language but they are in no way authoritative Drobbler (talk) 08:28, 2 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've made the introduction more objective. Drobbler (talk) 08:36, 2 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]