Talk:Renata Carvalho/GA1

GA Review[edit]

Unsuccessful. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:50, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: GnocchiFan (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 00:49, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is a quickfail. Unfortunately, it's just not long enough to be a Good Article at about 450 words.

Some specific feedback:

"Vastly positive" reviews is too much to say in wikivoice. Maybe a bit more about that work (as she wrote it) and some quotes of reception?
I recommend reading WP:CINS to fix some minor comma issues.
Adding more critical reception of her work would help with the length issue. It'd also prevent a WP:PROSELINE from forming.

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