Talk:Playmate to Jesus

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Review: August 11, 2013. (Reviewed version).

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"The song, which was released" followed by "The song was released" is repetitive.
- Done Is "Published" better? Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"it only managed to chart" it only charted in...
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"and was only certified in that country" I imagine that to be obvious since it only charted in Denmark.
- I've removed it, so Done. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Danmark" Denmark.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Could link YouTube.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" a radio single[2] on 12 September,[3]" might as well place the two refs together after the punctuation.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The track was written as the first track" not great, rephrase to avoid repetition of "the ... track".
- Done Reworded, should look better known, though I really don't know what is wrong with repeating "the".Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox should say Producer(s).
- I'm confused here. How do you make it say producer(s), cause I've been looking all over the template page and can't find how to do it. Do you know? I don't think this should even be a problem. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"pop song[2]" similarly, place this after punctuation, it won't harm the reader to have to wait a few words for the ref.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"an E Major key" major.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Lene's vocal" surnames please.
- Done She has been under her stage name "Lene" for some of her solo release, so I don't see why this is a problem. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Rene Dif's bridge is cut from the 3.5 single edit of the song" ditto, and what's a 3.5 single edit?
- Done changed Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The song has been certified gold" by whom?
- Done by the IFPI Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Time Magazine is actually Time.
- Done changed it. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think the link you use for Idolater is what you're after.
- What are you trying to say? EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Oh, wait. I had it disambung it. Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 17:22, 6 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
""How R U Doin?".[15]" no need for the spare full stop.
- Done I think i fixed it
Denmark again.
- Done fixed it. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Aqua members as they appear in the video." no need for full stop, not a complete sentence.
- Done changed Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Chart positions table is pointless being sortable.
- Done fixed it Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Sales/shipment but the article says it was 300k streams which is very different.
- Done Changed to "sales of 300,000 units"
"Accessed from... " or "Retrieved..."? Be consistent in the refs.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Is it Allmusic or Allmusic? Be consistent.
- Done I've added Rovi Corporation as publisher to make it clear. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 10 has no accessdate. Check others.
- Done added accessdates Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A few issues, so I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:55, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]