Talk:Neapolitan campaigns of Louis the Great

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General revision[edit]

I tried to revise this messy article, often written in a very poor and mysterious English. Unfortunately, severeal passages were frankly ununderstandable, so I was forced to suppressed them. I used an Italian source for the rest, adding clarifications and further facts when possible. --Attilios (talk) 14:07, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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I can find none of the terms mentioned in this article—Neapolitan Campaigns, Neapolitan Adventure, or Neapolitan–Hungarian Wars—in the English literature. There are many references to somebody's Neapolitan campaigns (El Gran Capitán's, Garibaldi's, the Ostrogoths') and "my Neaplitan adventure", but that's it. This article needs a different title. Srnec (talk) 05:13, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Was few differing name in the hungarian history. Such as the Battle of Mohács, his other names "Bane of Mohács" (Mohácsi vész), other names of Transylvania ("Erdély"), others "Erdőelve, Erdélyország" (i don't know what in english). This is the hungarian tradition. Doncsecz (talk) 17:06, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

But we cannot just translate a Hungarian phrase, because we may not end up with an established English term. There have been many Neapolitan campaigns and adventures in history, what name do these ones go by (in English)? Srnec (talk) 03:46, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If was many "Neapolitan War," then necessary a disambiguation. I ken but this Neapolitan War. Doncsecz (talk) 08:20, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]