Talk:Marie Redonnet

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Stray comments[edit]

Some missing quote marks? Wounded World???

More Information[edit]

What you wrote was concise and informative. I did not make any edits. However, I wish there had been more to read about. Would it have been possible to get a hold of some of her work so that you were able to discuss more of her themes? If you had been able to I think it would have made your article much richer. Also, I believe adding more about how she was received by the public and critics really could have benefited you. --Esunnucks (talk) 20:48, 25 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

I like the overall layout of your wiki page. I saw a minor spelling and grammar mistake and I corrected it. The only thing I didn't like was when you used the term "wounded world". If you got a quote from another source, you should probably put quotation marks. Cjumeh11 (talk) 21:50, 25 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]