Talk:Kyra (Charmed)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- No copyvio detected
- No dablinks detected
- External links are fine
- Development
- Expand WB
- every women on Charmed "woman"
- Wikilink Charmed: Season 10 at first mention, it is linked later
- Appearances
- A few words about "the Elders" and "the Avatars"? That would save readers a click
- Done, but let me know if more needs to be added.
- The "#" may be confusing
- Reception
- I would say Kyra when I begin the section
- What exactly is Hypable?
@Sainsf: Thank you for picking up all three of my articles for review. I have addressed your above comments; please let me know if there is anything else I can improve. Aoba47 (talk) 04:22, 22 June 2016 (UTC)