Talk:I.aM.mE

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Cleanup[edit]

This article requires some serious cleanup. We have very little background information, and it is not properly cited. The fourth reference used in the article links to the MTV ABDC website biography for I.aM.mE, and in no way correlates to the sentence in the article that talks about them disbanding Marvelous Motion. Also, we probably don't need two separate references to prove that their crew originated from Houston. If anyone could find something about the individual dancers' backgrounds (with a good reference), that would be fantastic.

In all honesty, the section that describes their ABDC performances is way too meticulous and way too informal. It requires a good amount of copy editing and grammar fixes. If it's not done, then the section has to be deleted.

If you look at another ABDC article, such as Fanny Pak, that is what the article should strive to look like. That article contains verifiable information; there is a lot of information about the individual dancers, and their experiences as a group outside of ABDC. WaninokoZ♪♫♪ 02:58, 18 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]