Talk:He Could Be the One/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:24, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• Lead

is a pop song -> The infobox only says "Country pop"

Since Cyrus or Hannah Montana, if you will, is a pop singer, the song is pop. It would be redundant listing "Pop, country-pop" on the infobox since one of them is very broad and includes the other. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

Ok. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

as promotion for an episode of the same title the series' third soundtrack, -> missing word

 Done

reaching the top twenty in Norway and the United States. "He Could Be the One" peaked at number ten on the Billboard Hot 100, -> Should be reworded.

Why? Sounds fine to me. There isn't any repetition. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

Forget this. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

• Background

"He Could Be the One" co-written by -> "He Could Be the One" was co-written by

 Done

According to Allmusic, its genre has some teen pop influences -> source states that the soundtrack has teen pop influences, not the song

The soundtrack includes the song. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

Ok. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

He described Cyrus' vocals to be with a slight twang and husky.[6] -> Who?

Truitt. I changed "He" to "Truitt" and, in the last sentence, "Truitt" to "him". Is that O.K.? -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

Ok. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

• Chart performance

of the Billboard Hot 100 and any country -> of the Billboard Hot 100 or

 Done

and any country -> source does not say that

 Done

• Music video

heart breaker -> heartbreaker

 Done

The song debuted and peaked at number ninety-nine on the Canadian Hot 100, -> source says 97

 Done

He Could Be the One" peaked at number sixty-eight on the Australian Singles Chart, -> According to the source or this it didn't enter to the chart.

I forgot that Australian-charts.com only supplies the top fifty positions. The charting position should be archived in Pandora. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

What is "Pandora"?. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 19:30, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

It's an archive for charts in Australia. I'll make sure to look for the week corresponding to the song. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 01:35, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

 Done

OK, only one thing and this'll pass (music video section). Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 02:46, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

There are some comments, article on hold until June 18, 2010. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 18:24, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

All done within seven days, meets GA criteria, so I have to say pass. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 03:39, 13 June 2010 (UTC)