Talk:HMS Mashona

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Mashona (F59)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 22:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I've assessed the article as B class, and will do a GA review. Djmaschek (talk) 22:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

Here is the review. The article looks very good, but there are a few issues listed below. Djmaschek (talk) 02:33, 3 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Introduction: "During first year..." > "During the first year..."
Infobox: It lists pennant number, but there is no source given for this in the text or infobox.
Wartime modifications: paragraph 1. "Mashona had hers fitted during her August–May 1940 refit." The range "August-May 1940" looks wrong. Do you mean August-October 1940?
Norwegian campaign: paragraph 2. Unless I missed an earlier reference, Sikh needs a hyperlink.
Subsequent operations: paragraph 3: "The ships rendezvoused later that afternoon..." Which ships? It's not clear to me whether Mashona met with Rodney, Mashona met with King George V, Rodney met with King George V, or some other combination.
- See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:47, 3 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - GA class. All items fixed. Everything looks good. Djmaschek (talk) 21:53, 4 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]