Talk:Frozen II/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments? @Some Dude From North Carolina:. Wingwatchers (talk) 05:37, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Wingwatchers: He'll likely add them later. Just keep an eye out . Pamzeis (talk) 05:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Add alt text to the poster and the image in #Animation.
  •  Done
  • In the infobox, does "screenplay by" need a source?
  • ... no, it's credited. Should I remove it?
Yes. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:52, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
minus Removed
  • "in in-universe" - bit repetitive
  •  Fixed
  • "in-universe perspective chronological timeline" - kinda wordy
  •  Fixed
  • "fan's aspiration" - should be plural, right?
  •  Fixed
  • "The film is notably darker tone and heavier in computer effects" → "The film contains a notably darker tone and is heavier in computer effects"
  •  Done

Plot and cast[edit]

  • "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)
  •  Done
  • That's it. No issues with #Cast.

Production and marketing[edit]

  • Did some copy-editing here and removed some long quotes.

Release[edit]

  • As seen in this GA-article, add a subsection titled #Theatrical.
 Done Chompy Ace 00:49, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "46 languages ... four more than the first film, which was ... 42" - bit repetitive
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Following upon the success" → "Following the success"
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "digital HD" should be written as "Digital HD"
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Blu-Ray" → "Blu-ray"
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "included" → "include" (still available)
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add hyphens between "behind the scenes".
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Put quotation marks around "Multi-Language Reel".
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "songs performance" - reword
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • as well as multiple deleted songs: "Home" and "I Wanna Get This Right", and "Intro"; and removed footages: "Prologue", "Secret Room", "Had Nokks" and "A Place of Our Own" → as well as deleted music and footage (the "quoted" scenes don't really mean much to readers)
 Done Chompy Ace 00:54, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "It was initially" → "The film was initially"
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to released" → "to be released"
 Done Wingwatchers (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

 Done Chompy Ace 00:51, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "$42.2 million" → "$42.4 million"
  •  Done
  • "$130.3 million" → "$130.7 million"
  •  Done
  • Add a comma after the first use of "second weekend".
  •  Done
  • "$85.6 million" → "$85.2 million"
  •  Done
  • Add a hyphen between "highest grossing".
  •  Done
  • What source does "India ($3.1 million)" come from?
  • Is actually Mexico based on a source from Deadline Hollywood.  Done Wingwatchers (talk) 02:15, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The PostTrak score needs a source.
It is already cited with the Deadline Hollywood source, Postrack is not a website. Some with a featured article, Atlantis: The Lost Empire.  Already done Wingwatchers (talk) 02:19, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Wingwatchers: I know that. The PostTrak score is not featured in that article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:28, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: minus Replaced. Pamzeis (talk) 11:55, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The recipients in #Accolades should be sorted by last name using this template.
  •  Fixed

References[edit]

 Done Chompy Ace 00:57, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • WP:IBTIMES finds International Business Times "generally unreliable".
  •  Fixed
  • Sort categories in alphabetical order.
  •  Done
@Pamzeis:, can you leave some tasks for me? Thanks. Wingwatchers (talk) 15:53, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Wingwatchers: I have added all my notes. Article is on hold. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:37, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
What do you mean? Do you mean you want me to not complete some of the notes so you can do them? Pamzeis (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Hopefully, all  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:48, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Pamzeis, Chompy Ace, and Wingwatchers: Great teamwork! Thumbs up icon Passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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