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Comment: Some formatting comments while you're waiting in line for review. *That is not how to footnote, please instead use the coding shown at WP:Referencing for beginners. It automatically numbers everything for you, way easier to keep straight. I've fixed the first for you as an example.*Do not call him "Mr. Haskell", just say "Haskell"*It'd be helpful if you could WP:Wikilink key terms. Not simple words like "painter" but technical terms like intaglio and Woodstock, Connecticut, so that it links to those articles.*Regarding "Photo credit: Ernest Haskell by Dorothea Lange circa 1920 San Francisco, California" - if a photo is verfiably pre-1923, it falls into the public domain and can be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. If not so verifiable, any photo of Haskell can be uploaded under the WP:Fair Use copyright exemption, but only one photo, of small size (the display size of the screen, like 300x300px, not a big one, and low-definition) can be uploaded and displayed only on this article, and only after this draft is published.These issues will not necessarily keep the draft from getting approved, since they're just formatting, but they'll make the draft a lot tidier, and will be good practice for your next article after/if/when this draft publishes. MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:17, 21 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Some formatting comments while you're waiting in line for review. *That is not how to footnote, please instead use the coding shown at WP:Referencing for beginners. It automatically numbers everything for you, way easier to keep straight. I've fixed the first for you as an example.*Do not call him "Mr. Haskell", just say "Haskell"*It'd be helpful if you could WP:Wikilink key terms. Not simple words like "painter" but technical terms like intaglio and Woodstock, Connecticut, so that it links to those articles.*Regarding "Photo credit: Ernest Haskell by Dorothea Lange circa 1920 San Francisco, California" - if a photo is verfiably pre-1923, it falls into the public domain and can be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. If not so verifiable, any photo of Haskell can be uploaded under the WP:Fair Use copyright exemption, but only one photo, of small size (the display size of the screen, like 300x300px, not a big one, and low-definition) can be uploaded and displayed only on this article, and only after this draft is published.These issues will not necessarily keep the draft from getting approved, since they're just formatting, but they'll make the draft a lot tidier, and will be good practice for your next article after/if/when this draft publishes. MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:17, 21 November 2014 (UTC)