Talk:Dirty Picture

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DateProcessResult
December 6, 2010Good article nomineeListed
January 9, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
October 20, 2022Good topic removal candidateDemoted
Current status: Good article

Writers[edit]

Can anyone clarify the song writers for "Dirty Picture"? The Rokstarr album sleeve has Kesha as a credited songwriter but the CD single sleeve removes this credit. Is there some sort of database that can clarify this as there is currently no source provided in the song writers section! TopopMAC1 (talk) 23:38, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Just checked the Kesha UK album sleeve and she's credited as writer in her album notes too. TopopMAC1 (talk) 23:41, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Music Video Section[edit]

The 'Music Video' section has some problems: The use of & in 'He sings the "take a dirty picture" verse & then Kesha sings...' should probably be spelled out, as well as in the next sentence, and 'dirty' when talking about the pole dancer should be explicit, right? —Preceding unsigned comment added by FLANAGAN creto (talk • contribs) 22:55, 7 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The 'Music Video' section neglects to mention the most provocative scene, in which Ke$ha is laying on her back on a bar, while the bartender pours liquor over her see-through blouse. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BiCuriousDarwinException (talk • contribs) 19:16, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Picture[edit]

Shouldn't the music video picture show at least Cruz? He is the main artist. Wait, I don't think there's a scene with both of them, right? (Don't remember; saw the music video months ago). Yves (talk) 01:16, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Here's one I capped a while back. It is the quality pose of them together in the video, but it really isn't notable in anyway, so I don't know if it would pass NFCC#8. It may qualify because they are using their fingers to "take a picture" - [1] Candyo32 01:21, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Theres one at the end its insanely blurry and all of his solo scenes are of him humping girls and standing in from of a car, they wont pass NFCC. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 01:22, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request from 98.211.73.42, 27 September 2010[edit]

{{edit semi-protected}} Dirty Picture was actually written by Kesha, and was going to be a song on her album, but when it did not make her album she sold it to Taio Cruz to use for his album. Remember that before Kesha was a famous singer she was a songwriter for many different singers, such is the way that Lady GaGa got her start, just like she wrote Fever and sold it to Adam Lambert. Songwriters get paid way more than the actual artists do, coincidence huh? lol. So yeah, if you could fix the part that says that Taio Cruz wrote the song, that would make this more informative for readers.

98.211.73.42 (talk) 22:21, 27 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

 Not doneThe fact that Cruz wrote the song is referenced. If you can prove that Kesha also wrote the song with reliable source(s), please request the edit again with link(s) or similar. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:26, 27 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: ΣПDiПG–STΛЯT 22:53, 6 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • "Dirty Picture" is a song by Taio Cruz. Expand it a little bit, maybe something like "Dirty Picture" is a song by American R&B singer Taio Cruz.
  • Link Fraser T. Smith, Lady Gaga, and Dr. Luke.
  • Change "...of the song has been generally positive" to "...of the song was generally positive"
  • Remove the word "dumb" I'm assuming this was vandalism that went undetected?
Infobox
  • Link Fraser T. Smith in the writers section.
Music video
  • Maybe expand with some more information if you can find anything. Maybe something about where it was filmed, and when?
Track listing
  • Remove the "feat" Kesha parts.
  • Possibly retitle them to something such as "Digital EP" and "Digital Remix EP"
 Done Everything has been changed except Music video because i spent like an hour on that section, its as good as its going to get, unfortunately it didnt get alot of coverage for some reason. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 23:13, 6 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Critical Reception[edit]

Bad grammar[edit]

"laying on top" should be "lying on top". 86.164.240.239 (talk) 11:38, 19 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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