Talk:Dharmasiri Gamage

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@Dan arndt: what do you mean by weasel words? Is that these weasel words or something else? Please be kind enough to show some that beyond Wikipedia. Unless you'll lose your tags :) thanx. Madunai (talk) 00:37, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Here are some "Later, he became one one of the most senior journalists in Sri Lanka but his role of significance as a poet, lyric writer, author and film director is still being admired and has been regarded in the intellectual sessions among many Sri Lankan academics and many thousands of his students who are currently involved in journalism, art and literature in the country".

  • In the beginning - okay I started looking, and this whole this is one big peacock. In addition the few sources I looked at do not really relate to what is being said. VVikingTalkEdits 00:52, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • I concur with VViking, there is so much work that it is hard to know where to start. I would suggest that you reduce the article to the bare facts, eliminating words such as was an oasis and influence of Siri aiya was lamp-post that guided his future life, became famous as an early youth forum and He was a traveller and published his experiences. Dan arndt (talk) 02:05, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Dan arndt: Of course you're right. Thank you so much for your kind. Let's leave it as it is because I haven't enough knowledge on the subject. Somebody may correct those errors in near future. What I merely know is that Dharmasiri Gamage was known as a significant character in Sri Lanka. Thank you, Dan arndt. Madunai (talk) 15:38, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]