Talk:Choctaw/Archives/2021/October
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Lead is too long
The Lead is much too long, as was identified in an assessment by others several years ago. It should be about four paragraphs. I may make an attempt to shorten it. This article has many good elements and covers both history and 20th-century important US court decisions affecting Choctaw people. It deserves to be cleaned up.Parkwells (talk) 14:01, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
- Four years later, but I completely agree with you. This entire is unreadable due to excessive length. Yuchitown (talk) 00:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Yuchitown
Assessment comment
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| After months of improvement and several GA reviews I believe, however biased it may be, this article deserves a promotion Rob (talk) 17:32, 6 March 2009 (UTC) Added to B-List, Rob (talk) 18:20, 25 April 2008 (UTC) |
Last edited at 19:51, 14 November 2011 (UTC). Substituted at 11:35, 29 April 2016 (UTC)