Talk:Better Things (film)

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Although well written, the Criticial Reception section may be misconstrued as being subjectively biased. In particular, the opening sentence "The critical response to Better Things was overwhelmingly positive..." and "it was...also attacked in some quarters" etc

strays from the neutrality of the article. For this reason I suggest that this section be edited to include a more neutral presentation of the critical reception, perhaps by removing the offending phrases altogether, or changing to something like "Better Things recieved positive reviews from ABC and earned the best film accolade from XYZ magazines"

"It also received more unfavourable reviews from some critics who found the bleakness and overall tone to be unfavourable" (It may also be useful from a presentational and/or aesthetic POV to seperate the positive and negative feedbacks into separate paragraphs.)

91.103.184.145 (talk) 17:00, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

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