Talk:Bahiga Hafez

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Hey Nic.eperry,

Great start on your article! There are a couple things I feel you can adjust:

In your intro summary, it would be good if you could add works she's most known for and also in the article, I know you mentioned that she has experience as a co-screenwriter, but you haven't listed any examples of her works.
For the infobox, I believe under "Years active", she wasn't just active in 1930 because you did mention she produced a film in 1937, so you can add that
In her personal life, you mentioned she speaks multiple languages. If you have the information, you should list the ones she can speak, otherwise maybe it would be best to remove that tidbit as its kind of vague.
Finally, there were some sentence structuring that I feel you can adjust or combine. For example the sentence, "With Fanar Films, Hafez co-directed the film al-Dahaya. She also acted in it.", you could write it as "With Fanar Films, Hafez co-directed the film al-Dahaya, in which she also had an acting role", but this is just a personal preference because I find the structuring a little choppy.

Otherwise everything else seems good, I hope these suggestions helped.

-Snowydaze — Preceding unsigned comment added by Snowydaze (talk • contribs) 21:58, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Birthyear[edit]

Should the birthyear be 1908 rather than 1901? The majority of book sources give 1908 as the year, e.g. Roger B. N. Smither (2002) This Film is Dangerous, p.369: "She was born on 4 August 1908, in Alexandria". Dsp13 (talk) 14:42, 5 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]